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Tits. You've got a cool style you keep consistent throughout your animations, and you really know how to set someone up for a good deal of shock value. Looking forward to the next rotten bit you pump out.
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I feel like every bit of your animation was both funny and novel (especially the bit where Spongebob has fucked up legs) until Spongebob returned from the Krusty Crab. From there until the end, your pace slowed down, and nothing really seemed to keep me glued to the screen other than a desperate hope that you would hit me with something other than 12 vomit jokes.
I'm NOT slamming your work, as it is fucking fantastic. Just keep up what you've got, and don't interrupt your editing pace for anything (cut whatever gets in the way of the joke).
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Love the animation style and timing. I'm pretty sure this series got me through my senior design project...awesome.
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Beautiful animation. You really have a good style, and a great feel for the timing of your characters. The only thing that bothered me was the mini flashback sequence (when the girl is shot). Why? Why God why did the protagonist have a flashback sequence of events that occurred 5 minutes beforehand? It hurt me.
-bboychops
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"You had the right idea...what happened?"
You had a good idea, but it seemed like you tried to use too much too fast. That is, your style seemed to irrationally jump from one area to another with no transition or rational thought which made the flash seamless. I would work on giving more of a logical flow to your animation, and try to give your jokes a little more flair. Also, I would take out the option for the user to direct the text, and simply animate the thing (makes everything take longer than it should).
You certainly have a good grasp of character design and final fantasy; I'd give another FF6 flash a try before you move on.
-bboychops
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Hey man, I think you've got yourself a great start. Just keep up the good work, and keep on working on your flash work.
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Couldn't have been any better. I am extremely impressed.
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You did a wonderful thing here. I just wish I thought of it first.
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It was a cool animation, but it got on my nerves after a minute when you kept on placing in extraneous sound effects.
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